Last vacation we went on a trip to Acapulco. The trip started on Friday and ended on Monday. On Friday we left Buenavista at 7:00 p.m and we left in a car. We were 8 in a car. We arrived at a friend's house at 1:30 am but we continued the party.
The next day we went to swim to the coast, but the tide was highest than usual, and we saw something strange, many stingrays began to arrive. The population wanted to catch them, but the tourists and we defended them, because the stingrays are the most important animals in this area.
After the population surrendered, and we continued the party with tourists.
The last day we went to see the dawn at 5:00 am.
I think it was a nice journey and interesting because she could look the pollution and, in a future she gona keep the earth clean
ResponderEliminarSanchez Lopez Daniel
Básico 5 Inter1
Helo!
ResponderEliminarI think who you can use holidays instead of vacation.
In this part: 8 people. Because the idea isn't complete.
Use so instead but.
The action of the tourists was great!
Good job!!
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see you soon!