Journey with my friends
The best travel with Diana, Jorge and Valeria.
We are best friends and in this blogg we talk about our journey from Mexico to Brazil, today was a last day in Rio de Janeiro.
We travel for one weekend but we feel past the time so fast, during the flight we can´t sleep fine.
This morning we walk from to the hotel to Ibiza´s Festival during thirty five minutes but in the way we lost because the street is big and the name of the street´s is difficult to understand and the people don´t speak spanish.
The mexican people is more friendly than brazilian people, so we tried find a solution to arrive the festival.
Then we saw a bus because the transport in Brazil is the most fastest in Latin America so we can arrive to the festival on time and safe.
Finally the festival was funny and colorfull, we dance all the music because we like so much that kind of music and we had the oportunity to meet a lot of people to many different countries around the world.
STUDENTS:
Diana Laura Martínez Sánchez
Jorge Ranulfo Cortez Ávila
Valeria Balcazar
*in this blog(g)
ResponderEliminar*name of the street(‘s) is difficult
José Armando Barbosa Mancilla
Hi, in this blog i think that you should use the coma in the second paragraph between "minutes and but" and you writing "we walk from the hotel to ibiza's festival".
ResponderEliminaronly is my opinion, so the rest of blog is perfect for my.
DIANA LAURA MAYO ANZUREZ
God job and interesting story!
ResponderEliminarJust few comments on it =)
-"...today is our last day in..."
-You didn´t use past simple throughout the story =(
-"Mexican people is friendlier than Brazilian people..."
See you soon!