The best carnival in the world.
Last February I travelled from Mexico City to Venice on my own. I went to Carnival of Venice for a week. The flight was a very long journey but it was comfortable. The staff in aeroplane was polite. And when I finally arrived to Venice, there weren´t any available rooms in the hotel so I spent much money in another hotel. It was the most expensive hotel room.
In this city there was a colourful and funny carnival. Streets in Venice were crowded on February because the Venice´s Carnival is better than other festivals in this country. When I was in the Venice´s Carnival the weather was terrible. However, I enjoyed it because it was the best festival in many years.
The last day of my journey I fell out in a canal and I was dragged and a police officer helped me. He was nicer police officer than the majority of police officers. Then I could come back to Mexico.
Students:
Hernández García Diana Karen
Sánchez López Daniel
Vargas González Rubén
Great job and interesting story!
ResponderEliminarJust few comments about it :)
-"The staff in the aeroplane..."
-"...in Venice were crowded in February because Venice Carnival..."
-"When I was in Venice Carnival..."
See you soon!
I think in the first paragraph where say " And when I finally arrived to Venice" is better "after a long journey arrive to Venice".
ResponderEliminarWhere say "I enjoyed it because it was the best festival in many years" you mean your best festival or the best event in the country?
Julio Cesar López Pérez