THE BEST CRUISE IN THE WORLD
The last year I had a journey from Puerto Vallarta to Chiapas, it was on a cruise through Pacific Ocean. During 2 months, I visited many beaches as: Manzanillo, Zihuatanejo, Acapulco, Puerto Escondido, Huatulco and Salina Cruz. This journey was very nice because I ate a lot of delicious food and I slept in amazing room. In the rooms there are air conditioning and WI-FI. The cruise´s staff was kind and friendly. The best dish was lobster.
Everything was good, but the cruise stopped in a wrong place because didn´t have fuel. Here, there weren´t interesting things so the capitan offer us an apology for the situation.
Finally, a lot of passengers received free drinks two nights. This journey was the best in my life. The meals was tastier than food in other cruises. This journey was the most expensive cruise in Mexico.
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Morales Balbuena Miguel.
Ramírez De Los Reyes Ivonne Amalinalli.
Robles Campuzano Omar.
Torres García Antonio.
The mistake in paragraph 1 is:
ResponderEliminar*I slept in AN amazing room.
*In the rooms there WAS air CONDITIONER and wi-fi.
The paragraph 2:
*because IT didn't have fuel.
Ortega Uribe Alejandro
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ResponderEliminarHello it is very interesting the cruise. Were the best 2 months but the mistake in the parágraf 3 is:
ResponderEliminar*free drinks FOR two nights.
*the MEAL was BETTER than...
Herrera Galván José Alejandro
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